Patricia Polacco was a famous writer who wrote books. She loved to listen to stories her family told her. Then Patricia wrote stories about true events. Patricia says books are her life. One day we would like to meet Patricia Polacco. Also we would like to ask her why did she write stories.
Ryan-Good DETAILS!
Quinn:You should write more
Kaau: glow she did write good books. glow underline title.
Tyler and Shariah: Grow in your Topic sentence you should change Writer into Author. Glow Good closing.
Caleb grow you have to put a question mark at the end. glow good details of her life
Kalin: Grow: Needs more DETAILS!
Glow:I like how you put your opinion at the end.
Patricia Polacco was a famous writer who wrote books. She loved to listen to stories her family told her. Then Patricia wrote stories about true events. Patricia says books are her life. One day we would like to meet Patricia Polacco. Also we would like to ask her why did she write stories.
Ryan-Good DETAILS!
Quinn:You should write more
Kaau: glow she did write good books. glow underline title.
Tyler and Shariah: Grow in your Topic sentence you should change Writer into Author. Glow Good closing.
Caleb grow you have to put a question mark at the end. glow good details of her life
Kalin: Grow: Needs more DETAILS!
Glow:I like how you put your opinion at the end.